The Something's Not Right Package

You officially hate your story. Your characters are stupid. Your world is boring. Or maybe it's just that you've read it one too many times. So before you rage quit, let me take a look at it and help you find what's not working.

What the Package Includes:

Send Me What You Have

You do not need a full manuscript for this package. Whatever you have is fine.

I'll Take a Close Look

I'll read it through carefully, seeking out what's making the story not work and considering what it needs.

I'll Give You My Advice

I'll email you a detailed report, pointing out problems and giving advice for your future plotting and writing.

I reserve the right to turn down any manuscripts that do not align with my religious beliefs or ethical standards. Thank you for understanding.

Services like never before

I can guarantee you that you have never seen such writing packages as mine before. Thorough, affordable, and high quality. It's hard to get all of these at once. Well, not here. Here it's easy because that's all I offer. Are you ready to get started?